Saturday, February 6, 2010

Working on Dialogue

I chose #1, the husband and wife on the brink of divorce, looking through old pictures they had in their attic.

Tracy: Smiling at Mark..."Don't you remember this day in Hawaii on our honeymoon?"

Mark: "Yes, yes I do. You were trying to get me to take a serious, posed smiling picture, which i refused!"

Tracy: "So, of course you had to sneak in that kiss as soon as the photographer said cheese! What happened to us? Where did that life go?"

Mark: "I want that life Tracy, I need that life. To see how happy we were, I have completely lost sight of that until now. We have been so foolish."

Tracy: "This can't be end, we need to try harder, I know deep down we are still this vibrant couple with no care in the world besides our love. We raised two beautiful children, but in doing so we have lost ourselves."

Mark: "I love you Tracy!

Tracy: ( Grabbing Mark) "I love you soo much Mark."

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